Friday, October 29, 2010

This is my letter for a immigrant.

Dear Immigrant,

We all immigrants always  need to look  for the positive side of any issue we come up with. As an immigrants, there are so many wonderful things to learn, and you will realize later on time how much you can learn from leaving here, and  the stronger person  you get to be. We also encounter some barriers or difficulties that may slow us down in our progress of learning this new life and culture. However, there is only one way to overcome anything; always look up, follow and keep what is helping you. We all immigrants share the same felling of strangeness, and at same time, feel like helping anyone in need. I recommend  to come to any of us already familiar with rules and more. Please not hesitate to ask for help whenever you need it, there will be always someone to help you with your needs.

1 comment:

  1. Nice advice!
    A few changes:
    Title: use an (not a)
    change leaving to living
    We all immigrants - All of us immigrants
    felling - change to feeling
    change comma to semicolon: whenever you need it; there will always be
    - because the 2 ideas are interrelated.

    Keep writing! Good work!

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